<pony>First Real Attempt At Making Music

[Astral]

Hello everyone! I've been teaching myself how to use FL studio and I am proud to present my first real attempt at making a song. Feedback is always appreciated! Enjoy!
-Astral (Divine Melody)

http://soundcloud.com/divine-melody/theories-final

[EnnervateIndustries]

It sounds like you're going for a trance or house sound, right?

I'd check the rhythm synth, cause it seems to be consistently clipping, unless it has a click built into the sound, either way, it's a bit too loud. The transitions are generally good, but the last one, around the 3-minute mark, is a bit jarring. Otherwise, the synth sounds are good, and the drums fit in pretty well.

[Astral]

Thanks!

Well, turns out that I uploaded the wrong song version where the synth is louder and the clipping is lowered. Derp. But, it really doesn't sound much different than this version.

Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it!

[Anforium]

That was excellent for a first attempt! My first attempt was in Musescore and it was terrible. Great job!

[Astral]

Thanks a lot! Greatly appreciated!

I have the other version that I meant to upload.

http://soundcloud.com/divine-melody/theories-final