[Pony][Original][Orchestral-electronic] Desperation (Full)

[AndrewClocksin]

http://soundcloud.com/andrewclocksin/desperation-full-version-1

My first rendition of a "Desperation" track for the fanfic animation I mentioned earlier. I would love some feedback!

[Doctor Science]

At 0:34, I think the cello is a bit too loud and the snare/clap is too soft, and I would like to hear the last note a bit longer with maybe a little fading away, but otherwise I think this is great! I love the little piano figure at around 0:04, 0:08, etc., they fit in very well while incorporating the show's theme.

[AndrewClocksin]

At 0:34, I think the cello is a bit too loud and the snare/clap is too soft, and I would like to hear the last note a bit longer with maybe a little fading away, but otherwise I think this is great! I love the little piano figure at around 0:04, 0:08, etc., they fit in very well while incorporating the show's theme.

Thanks a lot for the feedback! This was just my first attempt so I'm going to do some revisions right away, and I'll definitely use the advice. Glad you liked it!