<Pony><Remix> This Day Aria (Electro House Mix)

[Matthew N.]

[Matthew N.]

BUMP. I could really use some feedback.

[thatguyzeke]

I'll jot down stuff as I listen.
I like that opening section.
It defiantly got moving around the minute mark.
The Words coming in around 1:45 were really nice. My only complaint was most of the music stopped after that, but you picked right back up soon after.
2:45, Loving it with the vocals and base.... Seriously. Favorite part of the song.
4:30 it felt the the vocals on "Good Cadence" conflicted a bit with the bass and drum beats a bit. Threw me off for a second but it wasn't too bad.

After thoughts, Defiantly something I would listen to again. I would want to hear it on a system with better bass to talk about EQ or anything, but I enjoyed it overall.

[Matthew N.]

4:30 it felt the the vocals on "Good Cadence" conflicted a bit with the bass and drum beats a bit. Threw me off for a second but it wasn't too bad.

EDIT: Wait, I thought that part was actually beatmatched properly. I did that different bassline/piano line in order to make it more interesting, and keep up with the trend of leaving the "correct" part for the last pattern of each section (as seen during the breakbeat, for example.)

Anyway, thanks. Those are very kind words.

[thatguyzeke]

Ah okay that makes sense. Yeah just a tiny bit of editing would fix that perfectly.

[Matthew N.]

Released.