<pony><orchestral><original> Manécaré Chrysatìé - WIP

[Wintergreen]

EDIT: I did stuff to it, but don't want to upload to soundcloud till it's done, so dropbox.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/77872817/tenta ... ion%29.mp3

[Edened]

It seems like a lot of the sounds get cut off early for some reason. I like it though, it has a good feel to it.
Also I'm curious on what kind of game you're making it for.

[gnarbeard]

There's a few parts where the sounds due cut a bit abruptly. Not sure if that was intended.

This is pretty epic though. I really like the choir and synth use towards the end. I'm also curious as to what game/type of game this is for.

[EverfreeLuna]

It seems like a lot of the sounds get cut off early for some reason. I like it though, it has a good feel to it.
Also I'm curious on what kind of game you're making it for.

It could be the Polyphonic limit on whatever VST or the DAW that is being used.

[Wintergreen]

I'm not entirely sure what caused the render to be bug out in a few places, but I have an idea.

Also I'm curious on what kind of game you're making it for.

This is for a hybrid RPG/RTS game that I'm not really sure I'm actually allowed to be talking about. This song specifically is for a Queen Chrysalis boss fight.

[MrCrackles]

beside the bug it's really really epic! For my taste the staccato section at 1.06 (onwards) could be a tick more powerfull but this is juts a matter of taste^^

[GhostXb]

If your using edirol, then I've also had the sudden cut off thing happen to me, could be a bug, not sure.

I feel like the song is very rhythmically driven with the percussion and the string staccatos being very dominant in the piece. Also, I feel like the string staccato loop gets a little repetitive after a while. I liked the variation and progression of it after a while, but when it returns to the main loop with the string I didn't like. When the horns played that rhythm, I really liked it though.

Another thing I noticed, is the piece hangs on to the same rhythm throughout the whole thing. I think this is what is causing problems for me. At 3:02 I think there was a missed opportunity to ditch the rhythm and percussive and break into another phase that focuses on developing a theme or progression. 3:20 felt like a progression that should have come sooner and closer to how I think the piece should have developed, but of course, that is where it ends.

That electronic synth added something fresh to the mix, I really liked it.

Anyways, I think this piece has potential, keep working on it.

[Wintergreen]

Ok, I think I fixed my issues, and got to try some mastering.