getting started

[xadobex]

sup guys so i made a post previously with a link to my remix, but i'm not too good at making my own stuff


can anyone offer some advice?
i've started work on one track but i dont have it uploaded yet due to its half-finished-ness.



thanks for any and all help!

[Makkon]

It's pretty hard to offer feedback without something to critique. Could you link it again?

[xadobex]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6Z0AsUMk0c&feature=plcp
here you go.

that's my remix. my track is on another computer that i don't have access to atm.

[Makkon]

Not bad, I think you did a decent job recreating the melody and timing. I think the synths could use some work, the percussion is decent but lacks some variation. Overall not bad, just keep writing more songs and you'll improve exponentially.

When it comes to electronic theory, perhaps some of our other members can offer better feedback.

[xadobex]

cool, thanks.

any members in particular that you know of that i could ask?