<ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

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<ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

Postby Facade » 08 Jul 2012 23:12

https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: <ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

Postby SpyPie » 08 Jul 2012 23:33

If I were you, I would switch the dist kick with a regular kick, that is incredibly, extremely, unbelievedly compressed.
It's freakin' awesome, otherwise, though, good job :)
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Re: <ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

Postby Facade » 08 Jul 2012 23:57

thanks! i've got one more track im working on then i might switch genre's for good still contemplating it
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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Re: <ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

Postby Sense A » 09 Jul 2012 00:57

Gawdayum, I'm in love with that kick Facade! I've been lookin for some hardstylin' bronies, and I can't believe I haven't found your stuff. Okay, love of hardstyle aside, what I'd say this needs is a bit more percussion work, maybe like some hi-hats or snares/claps to pronounce the beat a bit in the non-drop sections. Also the trancey lead synth sounds super distorted, might want to clear it up a tad. You've got a nice melody goin on, but might I also suggest you to make this longer? Haha how am I supposed to jam into jumpstyle with only a 2 minute song?? :D Anyways good work brony
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Re: <ponyish>,original>yay - facade[hardstyle]

Postby Facade » 09 Jul 2012 09:22

Thanks!
i try not to add hi hats/snares to my hardstyle mainly because the kick and melody take up ALL the mix and it sounds weird to me to have them in the non drop sections and not in the drop sections.
the lead was supposed to sound distorted xD
and as for length im not sure how to make it longer sorry
https://facadeofages.bandcamp.com/album ... o-the-dark
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