<Nonpony> Is this "hardcore"?

[Kagetori]

http://soundcloud.com/e9p3/mental-destruction-teaser
I don't know what else to put here.

[vladnuke]

Needs moar drumz. And actual song.

[BassRabbit]

I'm going to be completely honest. Not only is this not hardcore...I really don't know what to call it. It really just sounds like a jumbled mess of synth.

[Freewave]

its like if a hardcore artist tried to make a noise track. no it's not hardcore but i can see a nod to it.

[dark_on_5]

Wow man what have you drunk to make this? 10 RedBulls?

That's too fast, try to go down to 140 BPM, add some more bass and make some notes longer

Good luck!

[Whitetail]

If you're going for literal "hardcore" then it's all about the distorted kick, I'd suggest looking into some tutorials on how to do that. Like the melody thing you have going sounds like it could work for a hardcore track, but you don't have the

BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW BWOW

Going on to back it up.

[Kagetori]

Wow man what have you drunk to make this? 10 RedBulls?

That's too fast, try to go down to 140 BPM, add some more bass and make some notes longer

Good luck!

[Almost] all of my music is made with at least 320 tempo, but this is probably the only thing that sounds... crazy like that. I'll add more bass, but I already finished the whole track (which sounds slightly better than this version) and can't redo everything. I mostly just wanted to make something that sounded as insane as possible, it's like a one time thing though [possibly] I guess.

[XXDarkShadow79XX]

I hear a harmless preset...