<nonpony><original> Shiikaa - Torture

[Armando_]

I was thinking of which song on my soundcloud I could use to start off on this forum, so I decided, why not this one?
http://soundcloud.com/inquiry/shiikaa-torture-mastered-album
It's a track under my alias for Dubstep/Drumstep, Shiikaa. I would call this track a cross between dark ambience and dubstep. The thing is, I really feel this track, along with my others, can definitely be improved. That's why I really want feedback from you guys. Tell me what you think!

EDIT: I uploaded a new, remastered version of the song, which is now above there. I would still appreciate feedback though~