<WIP><Pony><Original><Post-Rock> As Celestia As My Witness

[gnarbeard]

http://soundcloud.com/gnarbeard/wip-acamw-np

Updated:

- Attempted some mixing and mastering. Not sure if I really made it any better or not. definitely need some feedback there.
- Removed pony samples for the time being. I'm planning to send this to a few musician friends of mine who aren't bronies. I left the original version at the end of this post for reference and comparison.
- Added fade in and fade out to help with the abruptness of the beginning and end of the song. Making things fade in and out in Ableton is weird...

This is an attempt at post-rock that I've been toying around with for quite a while.

I know it still needs work (mixing, mastering, polish, transitions are rough, intro is kind of abrupt, ending is very abrupt, etc.), but this is the first time I've gotten it to a point where it sounds at least some what like I want it to.

This is my first song, so any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

Original WIP with samples:
http://soundcloud.com/gnarbeard/wip-as-celestia-as-my-witness/s-LZIc8

[Edened]

Most of the problems that I see with it are mixing issues. The transitions too, but you've already said all that. Like the feel to it though, its pretty chill with some more upbeat parts.

[gnarbeard]

Most of the problems that I see with it are mixing issues. The transitions too, but you've already said all that. Like the feel to it though, its pretty chill with some more upbeat parts.

Thanks!
Mixing is something I know very little about. I attempted to do some mixing with this, but I don't really know what I'm doing there.

I was messing with transitions for a while the other day. I have ideas for ways to smooth things out, but I ran into some trouble making Ableton do my bidding.

[gnarbeard]

Updated first post.