<pony><original><wip> Loudmouth

[TheDnBGremlin]

I just want general feedback and tips, this is obviously not going to be 2:16 when I'm done...

[Kagetori]

It was pretty awesome for a while, I also love that awesome 'feeling' at 0:40 but it gets kinda boring after a while. Once you get to about 1:20 it could have more... um... melody, I guess. I mean, like a fast electronic side melody to keep it more interesting. After the "you're going to love me" part, I could imagine (if I were to have made it) a bunch of wubs... but, yea, that probably won't happen here. Not that it's bad or anything.