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<non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby Edened » 02 Jul 2012 13:17

I was just experimenting with this one and ended up turning into a whole song. Feedback would be highly appreciated. Thanks!

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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby soultensionbenjamin » 02 Jul 2012 15:32

the track is interesting it has a mellow feel the automation u used is good and i enjoyed the song however i did not find the chorus or the outro to intresting though.
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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby Edened » 02 Jul 2012 16:58

soultensionbenjamin wrote:i did not find the chorus or the outro to intresting though.

I know what you mean about the outro. I feel I could have done something better myself. Maybe some more melodic stuff.
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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby Edened » 03 Jul 2012 11:40

soultensionbenjamin wrote: however i did not find the chorus or the outro to intresting though.

Also, what do you mean by interesting? Like repetitive or something?
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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby BassRabbit » 03 Jul 2012 13:38

Hmm? Is that Harmor's Spicy Tuna preset I hear?
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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby Edened » 03 Jul 2012 13:52

BassRabbit wrote:Hmm? Is that Harmor's Spicy Tuna preset I hear?


Nice call out :lol:

Although hen I said expirmenting I meant I was trying to recreate presets in Harmless. So yea it pretty much is, with some tweaking and effects of course.

I though it was about time I learned how to use all these plugins properly.
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Re: <non-pony> <original> Shift

Postby gnarbeard » 04 Jul 2012 22:03

Not bad. I think this could be a good start...I think it needs a little more something though. Not quite sure what that something is though...maybe a stronger melody?

Your kicks sound a bit flat too. Maybe try making them a little more punchy?

Take my advice with a grain of salt here--I know next to nothing about electronic music. :P
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