<non-pony> <original> Cold Depths

[Edened]

This song came out really nicely considering it only took me a day to make. Yea its not very long because of that, but I think its fine. I would appreciate any feedback, thanks.

http://soundcloud.com/edened/cold-dephths

[LoreRD]

Pretty good! Nice melody and atmosphere to it. Would be nice to have a little more closure at the end, but that's about it for complaints.

[Edened]

Would be nice to have a little more closure at the end, but that's about it for complaints.

Yea I was already thinking about redoing the ending for that exact reason. Also just neatening it up in general and adding some ambient noises.