[Critique Needed][Band of Bronies Entry] Love and Tolerate

[MatthewMosierMusic]

Ok, here's essentially what I plan to submit to that contest. Thoughts?

http://soundcloud.com/matthewmosiermusic/love-and-tolerate-submission/s-XL1JL

[MatthewMosierMusic]

Sorry, here's the fixed link.

http://soundcloud.com/matthewmosiermusic/love-and-tolerate-submission

[MatthewMosierMusic]

Nobody has any thoughts on this one, at all? I would really appreciate anything you have to give me.

[LoreRD]

Has a bit of a "You've Got a Friend in Me" feel to it, which is nice. Nice use of harmonies too. Feels a little repetitive (maybe add more chords to the guitar?), but overall not bad!

[MatthewMosierMusic]

Has a bit of a "You've Got a Friend in Me" feel to it, which is nice. Nice use of harmonies too. Feels a little repetitive (maybe add more chords to the guitar?), but overall not bad!

Thanks!! Now that you mention it, I am seeing a bit of that same emotion in this. Not necessarily a bad thing in my mind though!

Also, I'll see what I can do about the repetitiveness, but I think, since the chords are fairly varied, maybe adding a lead part would do the trick??

[LoreRD]

Also, I'll see what I can do about the repetitiveness, but I think, since the chords are fairly varied, maybe adding a lead part would do the trick??

That could work