MY Virdgin vocal singing Featuring Rhyme Flow

[soultensionbenjamin]

http://soundcloud.com/soultensionbenjamin/soul-tension-mixdown




my singing may be bad bu i had fun

[MC_Flowny]

Hullo! Rhyme Flow here to add my two cents!

That song was SUPER DUPER FAST. Like Sonic-Rainboom fast. So for fun I took the original Anime song that my boy Soul Tension used and slowed it down. Here are the lyrics:


From the land where I'm from It's irrelevant
What your religion is, color of your skin or ambition is.

Listen in, Friendship is the sound of my instrument.
The size of the smile in your heart is my measurement.

Elements of Harmony is hardly an embellishment.
Tell it like the way it is. No need for sellin it.

Honesty, be true with your words and develop it.
Laugh in the face of your fear and envelop it.

Be kind - to those whose lives are unsettled and-
Be generous for generous sakes, like for the hell of it.

Loyalty to family and friends and never sway.
Friendship is a magical shield that tolerates.

And it never hates, in fact - it demonstrates peace.
Watch from the West - love resonates East.

From the skies of Cloudsdale to Canterlot's Peaks.
Behold the Mane 6 if it's friends that you seek.

Here's the song:
http://soundcloud.com/rhymeflow/soul-tension-mlp-re-intro

Big thanks to Benjaminz for his idea and instrumental that he found!

-Rhyme Flow

[colortwelve]

I quite like your voice, but if I might, allow me to offer a couple pointers:
-Maybe spend a little bit more time on lyrics.
-Breath control is important.

But beyond that, me gusta.

[Triple_B]

It feels like your vocals are in a different key for a bit once or twice; also, I would work on presenting more with your voice Soul Tension, and you as well Rhyme Flow; however I like the track itself, and your lyrics are well written enough to flow over the track, and you're both on beat, (though whether you really are or you synced the vocals to the track is to be seen; either is fine, tbh) also, I'd practice the singing a bit, you're voice broke a couple times. And your general mix needs work.

But overall; I enjoyed it, and you both have lovely voices, and the piano was really pretty; I liked it. I actually listened to it twice because I liked it; that's pretty rare from me.

I hope you both keep making music.