<repost> <orchestralstep> <unfinished> <pony> Raritystep

[Applebass]

I've already posted this song here, but I'm making a few adjustments for the final mix and wanted a fresh perspective. What do you think needs changing, improving etc? Thanks everyone!
http://soundcloud.com/applebass/raritystep-2-0

[CGEyeGuy]

It is lacking energy, try making shorter and catchy sections.

[NewWorldMare]

The vocal samples are too quiet in the mix. I really can't make them out, especially when the other instruments are playing. They're OK when they're alone. Also, I don't like the sample right at the end - because the background music isn't totally filtered out, it feels off.

I feel like the drums are too loud as well, especially the snare. The kick is too pronounced. Maybe take the reverb off it?

It is lacking energy, try making shorter and catchy sections.

I have to agree with this. Maybe adding some hi-hat action would help too. Or increasing the tempo a smidgen.

I do like the basses you use, and the first drop. The overall idea of the song is awesome!

[Applebass]

Thanks for your help guys! Drums have been adjusted, samples have been (slightly) calibrated, and the end sample has been removed. The song was originally meant to be kind of slow and downtempo, so there's not much I changed in that regard. I tried to play towards the more relaxed and smooth type of dubstep than the aggressive, faster type. But thanks again!