<Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

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<Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby Nikki-Layne » 16 Jun 2012 13:33

Alright, so this is my first (successful) pony remix. Any sort of feedback would be GREATLY appreciated! Good? Bad? Let me know what you think! :)

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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby Raddons » 16 Jun 2012 16:39

When the vocals come in, they don't sync well at all. Again, I'm not the biggest electronic listener, so I don't know if that's normal or not, but it's displeasing for me to listen to.

Everything else is good I think. It seems as if it would make a better original than being labeled a remix of At The Gala though.
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby Ed Viper » 16 Jun 2012 18:06

Now THAT is glitchy as hell in the beginning. Tone down the distortion on glitchy vocals a bit.

Also, the tempo on the regular vocals is a bit off. Try stretching your samples a bit, or perhaps slice them more so you can fit them to the tempo manually.
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby senntenial » 16 Jun 2012 18:26

Neato. For the vocals, in the beginning I didn't find them off beat. They were actually kinda cool, only thing I would suggest is tuning them a bit. Cool chord progressions. Good drums n stuff. Yoy. Gotta see more stuff.
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby VINXIS » 16 Jun 2012 19:10

The intro buildup sounds great. The vocal glitch at the beginning worked fine but that same one got boring later on, you had a good idea for adding other ones in. But after 1:08 when you added the singing parts in, you should have stopped the vocal glitch. It also sounded off-beat every time each of the mane-6 sang. (Sorry for repeating again,) So you should take the vocal glitch out when each of the mane-6 sing and it'll be all g. ALSO (sorry) when RD sang, it sounded off-beat too :\

Sorry if I was complaining about the vocals too much, it sounds all g besides that. :D
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby Matthew N. » 16 Jun 2012 19:19

I'm one of those who likes the general concept, but vocals seem totally off-beat. My brain just keeps screaming "No! It's not right!" :(
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby VINXIS » 16 Jun 2012 19:28

Matthew_N wrote:I'm one of those who likes the general concept, but vocals seem totally off-beat. My brain just keeps screaming "No! It's not right!" :(

Yea... that's what I've been trying to say... :\
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> At the Gala

Postby Nikki-Layne » 16 Jun 2012 21:52

Thanks for the advice/critique everyone!

Matthew_N wrote:I'm one of those who likes the general concept, but vocals seem totally off-beat. My brain just keeps screaming "No! It's not right!" :(


Yeah, synching vocals to my tracks has always been the weakest part of my game. I've actually heard that about this song before, but couldn't change it because I lost the project file when my old computer crashed.

I also agree with everyone who said that the glitching could have been done better, I just can't fix it. :(

Once again, thank you to everypony who was awesome enough to take the time to give me feedback. I truly appreciate it.
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