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<original><pony>World Of Color

Postby LoreRD » 30 May 2012 11:01



So, I just finished this 21 min long instrumental and I figured I might as well post it here. It took a while, but I think I did a good job on it. Still, I would appreciate it if anyone took the time to give some feedback and suggestions for improvement.
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby DannyMirage » 30 May 2012 12:33

I love the melody at 6:00
I think you could make the drums sound better though.
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby LoreRD » 30 May 2012 12:51

DannyMirage wrote:I think you could make the drums sound better though.


Yeah, was worried about that. I admittedly didn't spend a whole lot of effort into making GarageBand's drums sound better. Oh well, something to keep in mind for next time! :)
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby LoreRD » 14 Jun 2012 08:32

/bump :roll:
Sorry for the bump, but I'm soon going to start working on more of this kind of music, so I'd like to have a bit more feedback on this.
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby Senjan » 14 Jun 2012 18:42

Holy sh...21 minutes of pure delight!

Really cool melodies you have there. Going from relaxing, upbeat, mysterious and happy!
Impressive to say the least that you managed to make such a long collection sound so nice!

(EDIT: Vänta lite, är du också svensk?! Awesome! Alltid kul med svenska musiker haha!) =)
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby LoreRD » 15 Jun 2012 00:59

Japp, också svensk :D Känns som man ser hyfsat många svenskar här ändå :P
(Byter nu till engelska)
Anyway, thanks for the praise and for listening. Glad you liked it! :D Are there any general tips for making it sound better? (mixing, composition)
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby Senjan » 15 Jun 2012 08:27

I know nothing about mixing so far, but if you have a synth or a midi controller, I'd recommend you connecting it to your daw. It helps coming up with melodies much easier when you can naturally experiment and play around with your samples more naturally :)
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Re: <original><pony>World Of Color

Postby LoreRD » 15 Jun 2012 09:38

Kinda been planning on getting a relatively cheap MIDI keyboard for that purpose, but then of course HAD to stumble across this.... insane thing: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRBiccrT6Wg
Why does quality have to be so expensive... :cry:
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