<somewhat pony> <original> Shadows of the everfree

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<somewhat pony> <original> Shadows of the everfree

Postby ArcaneSoul » 12 Jun 2012 11:53

I need to post more often on this site.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qp95cA74sQ
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Re: <somewhat pony> <original> Shadows of the everfree

Postby LoreRD » 12 Jun 2012 12:43

Embed makes it a little easier



This is really good and I like it a lot. All of it sounds nice, but the one thing that I would improve on is a consistent atmosphere. This is about everfree, so it should be mostly creepy and foreboding. But then you have an upbeat riff all throughout the song. It doesn't feel right.
That being said and removing connection from everfree, this was REALLY enjoyable.
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Re: <somewhat pony> <original> Shadows of the everfree

Postby ArcaneSoul » 12 Jun 2012 15:00

Hmmm, i geuss you could say that.

The original version to this one was about 120 bpm that gave it a more mysterious feel. So that could be why since this one is like 140.

The ambient parts were a nice touch though and thanks for being honest. I rarely get critique :)
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