[WIP][non-pony]ElectroLide. feedback wanted!

[LFP]

Not much to say other than it will be longer [:

Imma just copy paste the description to keep this thread a little bit interesting:

I was making this to celebrate that i've been doing music for 2 months now, if I finish it in time I'll also try to enter the After Party album.
Also: This was kinda inspired by a friend of mine xP

Note: Renamed to ElectroLide because it sounds cooler.

[Matthew N.]

The first transition feels rather weird. Try moving the vox to the break part, so the next section starts as "yeah" ends. Kicks are too quiet for this type of track for sure. The frequencies of the bass synths seem to be overlapping in some specific parts of the phasing. I guess this might be caused by that additional higher key synth.

That's all for now, I guess.

[DannyMirage]

I like, keep it up!

[LFP]

Updated with new wip and video : O
also renamed it to electrolide because it sounds cooler

Nvm the transition in the start I'll work on that, just wanted to upload it so I could go to bed.

[Matthew N.]

I'd say it's slightly too early for youtube video, but I like what I'm hearing so far. That little med/high pitched sound between some parts may need to be moved up a little to better match the harmony of the song, though.

What I really DON'T LIKE is...

[non-pony]