[non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

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[non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby UnderpΩny » 10 Jun 2012 20:31

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/58047009/Yeste ... %20Jam.mp3

There's some sound glitches at the beginning but w/e
Something like this might have done for one of the charity albums if it weren't for all the samples
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby qJesse » 10 Jun 2012 21:09

Love it, absolutely love it. Actually, I pretty much love all of the things you make, Underpony. I've seen you do so many genres, and to do them so well...it really inspires me to keep going. Really does. I kinda went off topic now. I'll just make this text really tiny so you can read the bigger text first.

I'm no mixing expert, in fact I usually try to sway away from giving exact critique because I worry I'll be wrong, but...it all sounds good to me. Great job! ^^'
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby UnderpΩny » 10 Jun 2012 21:22

qJesse wrote:I've seen you do so many genres, and to do them so well...it really inspires me to keep going. Really does. I kinda went off topic now. I'll just make this text really tiny so you can read the bigger text first.

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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby Ed Viper » 10 Jun 2012 22:13

Wow. This is really cool. I don't know if this is what you were going for, but the kicks seem a little... weak? Not a lot of power to them. But with the mood of this song, you might have wanted that.

Other than that, I can't hear anything in this song that I'd change. Great work, as usual :D
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby UnderpΩny » 10 Jun 2012 22:25

EmpUbermensch wrote:Wow. This is really cool. I don't know if this is what you were going for, but the kicks seem a little... weak? Not a lot of power to them. But with the mood of this song, you might have wanted that.

Other than that, I can't hear anything in this song that I'd change. Great work, as usual :D

Thanks! You're right, I chose a kick sample that doesn't have the usual power in the pass frequencies, to keep it light and chilled out.
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby LoreRD » 11 Jun 2012 14:21

Whoa..... great stuff :O
Wish I could do stuff like this. Phenomenally atmospheric and very relaxing. Really, nothing I could suggest would make it better, period.
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby Mush » 11 Jun 2012 14:25

Is that... is that an IT Crowd song?
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby UnderpΩny » 11 Jun 2012 16:30

Mush wrote:Is that... is that an IT Crowd song?

It's not an IT Crowd fan song, but it's named for the first episode :D
That said, it does have Matt Berry's laugh from one of the Natural Confectionary Company adverts
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby Mush » 11 Jun 2012 16:49

I thought I heard him!
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby senntenial » 11 Jun 2012 22:15

Neato. Kinda is like if aphex twin wasn't absolutely insane. Only critique I have is to make some synths more dynamic, esp. that EP sounding one, just sounding a bit dry.
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Re: [non-pony][original][WIP] Yesterday's Jam

Postby Ed Viper » 12 Jun 2012 00:32

piedoom wrote:Neato. Kinda is like if aphex twin wasn't absolutely insane.


Yeah, that's a good way to describe this.
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