<pony><remix><dubstep> Rainbow Factory (Rainbowjack Remix)

[Rainbowjack]

I hate the song personally but criticisms would be lovely,

[bartekko]

Could use more reverb, imho, especially the snare, and the piano. The piano could also use some more expression. it's like all notes are the same velocity.
I like your lead sound. is that 3x osc? The drop isn't memorable, but that's a case with most dubstep i hear. I think i might be a bit bored with dubstep overall though.
The chorus is completely off time. fix that immediately
The synths are not bad, but there could be a bit more of them.

I'm sorry that I might made this sound like the worst remix ever, but i have this stupid habit of overcriticizing stuff. it's pretty good

[NewWorldMare]

I really like the speed-up/slow-down thing. That makes the entire song really unique Perhaps repeat the same effect, or make it longer?

I would like to know how you made the bass too, because it's pretty sick!

The snare is weak compared to the kick. Compress the *squeak* out of that And the kick might be too piercing.

The chorus... sounds muddy, but at the same time sounds like there aren't enough mids. It's weird.

I concur on the chorus vocals. If it was supposed to be off, it doesn't work.

Also concur on the reverb. The song in general isn't very full.

I think the entire mix could be louder too. Just my two bits.

[Rainbowjack]

If I made it any louder it clipped so much.

[Inkpony]

Needs more reverb definitely. The dubstep is pretty badass.

What piano are you using? Sounds to me like you need an upgrade on the keys.

Pretty song, just needs reverb and better quality keys, louder too. FL Keys sucks, but if you add enough reverb and equalise it to no end it sounds decently beast for Rainbow Factory. Lol.

All in all, good song, great concept, just work on it the keys a little bit.

[Rainbowjack]

Yeah FL Keys :/ I don't like this remix, I was just happy to get it done, it was more of an experiment with dubstep.

[Inkpony]

Yeah FL Keys :/ I don't like this remix, I was just happy to get it done, it was more of an experiment with dubstep.

Well I personally use FL Keys; I do hate it, but I've learned to improve the quality with piles of reverb and some equalising. I had my own remix of Rainbow Factory, but removed it because the kick and snare was grainy. I haven't gotten around to making it better.

It's a good remix, just, more reverb. Lol.

Also, question for my benefit. What are you using for those dubstep sounds?

[Rainbowjack]

Massive.

[Inkpony]

Massive.

I figured as much. I was just curious. ^^