inspiration...

[frostmane]

i need a few tips from anyone willing...i need to make the song "December" for a project. (its a sequel to september) and i am having trouble getting lyric on paper...for any lyricists out there...how do you do it?

[Freewave]

Definitely review what's been done so far lyrically on September and October (Stormwolf is doing November then I believe?) as it's a bit of a complicated storyline already. I know there were plans to do the whole calendar (Evdog told me) so you signed up already for December through them?

Definitely keep with the storyline and continuing it progressing. Feel free to post what you have so far if you need help on particular lines and we'll seer who can offer what and where.

[frostmane]

Stormwolf signed up for a later month =p

there is actually a whole storyline written out through may so far, in december (after some other things happen) i find tombstone nearly dead and nurse him back to health without realizing he is insane.

i kinda...have a few lyrics idk about them though

The frost covered the place they all dreaded
a nomad pony realized not, where he treaded

3 months ago destruction ravaged this place
Not a soul remained no trace of a familiar face

[Freewave]

Someday I'm gonna have to understand this storyline better, I still find it very confusing.

Your second lyrics seems to fumble on rymes in the same verse.

3 months ago destruction ravaged this place
Not a soul remained no trace of a familiar face.

obviously the last bit needs to rhyme but look for a different word than trace that wouldnbt rhyme and flows better.

Not a soul remained in this town not a familiar face. (maybe)

[frostmane]

ok xD thanks