need rappers for parody

[ElliottXP1]

So I need to find 2 rappers to colab with me on a parody of I'm on a Boat (I'm in Equestria)
I need you send me an mp3 of you doing the original so I can determine if you are good for the project.

Im going to be using ProTools for the mixing so all I need is the mp3. I will get back to you if you get in.

P.S. If you can do a great impression of T.Pain that would be SO AWESOME!

[vladnuke]

Well, I can definetly do parody. I'll try.

[Andanté]

Not to be a party pooper, but do you have a good set of lyrics for this rap? ''I'm in Equestria'' doesn't really seem to fit with ''I'm on a boat'' (one phrase being two syllables longer than the other).

I don't rap myself, but I do some rap and song lyrics, so if you need any help lyrics-wise, I'm available.

[vladnuke]

I'm on a horse?
Just spitballing here

[HerrPony]

I really like the idea, rewriting Lonely Island shouldn´t be too hard. Where do I post lyric ideas?

[HerrPony]

Here you go sorry I have no music in the backround and that I was doing it without any samples hope it´s still okay http://soundcloud.com/alexkennte/i-m-on-a-boat/s-8Yn5R

[Tremil]

I can rap. As long as the lyrics fit. (though only thing is... i dont use swears so..i may not fit the part)

[ElliottXP1]

Ok Its good to see the responses and replies to this idea. I will write up the lyrics and send a copy to everyone who's gonna be in it. I will inform anyone if they don't get in (sorry in advance if you don't).
Im gonna get started as soon as I finish this post. Seeya!

[ElliottXP1]

Ok heres the first verse im gonna do.

I'm in Equestria motherfucker take a look at me
Straight flyin in the sky rockin my oc
Bustin mach five, breakin at the sound barria
Can't stop me little hater cause I'm livin in Equestria

Take a picture, trick (trick) cause im a pony, bitch (bitch)
Im racin Rainbow Dash champ, cause it's so hip (hip)
I got my wings up, and got my cutie-markies
I'm flying high, you at work, straight flippin copies

[archaephyrryx]

Ok heres the first verse im gonna do.

I'm in Equestria motherfucker take a look at me
Straight flyin in the sky rockin my oc
Bustin mach five, breakin at the sound barria
You can't stop me little hater cause I'm livin in Equestria

Take a picture, trick (trick) cause im a pony, bitch (bitch)
Im racin Rainbow Dash champ, cause it's so hip (hip)
I got my wings up, and got my cutie-markies
I'm flying high, you at work, straight flippin copies

I can help you out with the lyrics. I am kind of a poet.

How about:

I'm in E to the Q motherfucker take a look at me
Straight flying in the sky, rocking my OC
Busting mach one, going on mach two
You can't stop me little hater cause I'm in the EQ

Take a picture, trick (trick), I'm on a cloud, bitch (bitch)
I'm a-racing Rainbow Dash, cause I'm so hip (hip)
I got my wings spread, and my cutie markies
I'm flying high, you at work, without Twilight Sparkies

I'm riding on a dragon, do a barrel roll
It's spitting fire, burning every foal
But this ain't Tolkein, that is not what I meant
I'm in EQ, and I'm cooler by twenty percent

I'm in EQ and, I'm flying fast and,
I'm playing with DJ Pon-3 in a rock band
I'm the king of the hoard, on those gems like Crackle
While you're on a shitty boat, with your block and tackle

Fuck Earth, I'm in EQ motherfucker
Buck trees, I ain't no applebucker
I'm on a cloud with my mares, motherfucker
What you're doing, no one cares, motherfucker

Hey Lauren Faust if you could see me now
Wings spread wide as they turn and bow
Gonna get sent to the moon somehow
With unicorn magic, anything is possible

Yeah I never thought I'd be a colt
But now I am a wonderbolt
Celestia look at me (all hooves in the air)
Never thought I'd see the day
When I'm eating oats and hay
Some troll called me gay, love and tolerate

[Andanté]

IMO, Elliott,you need to do some serious work on counting your syllables and actually making the entire song flow. There isn't much change in the lyrics from the original song apart from inserting various MLP references. I wish you good luck doing the lyrics - what you're trying to do is extremely difficult, even for a talented lyricist, let alone a newbie.

archae, I really like your lyrics more, but there are still some issues with syllable count, and I don't think it'll work if you refer to Equestria as 'EQ' all the time (mabye once or twice in a verse, but any more and it'll lose its charm).

[archaephyrryx]

IMO, Elliott,you need to do some serious work on counting your syllables and actually making the entire song flow. There isn't much change in the lyrics from the original song apart from inserting various MLP references. I wish you good luck doing the lyrics - what you're trying to do is extremely difficult, even for a talented lyricist, let alone a newbie.

archae, I really like your lyrics more, but there are still some issues with syllable count, and I don't think it'll work if you refer to Equestria as 'EQ' all the time (mabye once or twice in a verse, but any more and it'll lose its charm).

Yeah, the scanning is a bit off. I think it can be improved by changing the title to "I'm On a Cloud", in reference to the pegasi and their ability to stand and walk on clouds. Other than that, I could changed some of the instances of EQ to a cloud, so it would scan better and wouldn't get as tedious.

[ElliottXP1]

Ok guys guess what. You probably wont believe me when I say this but guess who I asked to be featured in
I'm on a Cloud (new title). iBringDaLULZ himself will be featured in this song rapping T-Pain's part.

[Tremil]

Ok guys guess what. You probably wont believe me when I say this but guess who I asked to be featured in
I'm on a Cloud (new title). iBringDaLULZ himself will be featured in this song rapping T-Pain's part.

Sweet. Have you decided on who to rap the other parts?

[archaephyrryx]

Okay, I worked a bit on the lyrics. You can find them here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yh8f4kaWuEoaTemW-r_pzCgZ2Y5C6vGreXHLivFcJIg/edit

If you need any edits, let me know.

[archaephyrryx]

Ok guys guess what. You probably wont believe me when I say this but guess who I asked to be featured in
I'm on a Cloud (new title). iBringDaLULZ himself will be featured in this song rapping T-Pain's part.

Sweet. Have you decided on who to rap the other parts?

If you could get Cats or Mic to do a part, it would be awesome.

[archaephyrryx]

Ok guys guess what. You probably wont believe me when I say this but guess who I asked to be featured in
I'm on a Cloud (new title). iBringDaLULZ himself will be featured in this song rapping T-Pain's part.

If you want me to, I can contact IBeABronyRapper about it and see if he wants to work on it.

[ElliottXP1]

well I actually already gave the last part to HerrPony. Sorry maybe some of you can be in upcoming projects.