<original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

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<original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Codeum » 07 May 2012 21:56

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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby colortwelve » 07 May 2012 22:20

Not sure if the title fits, but that's all I can come up with in the way of criticism. As always, beautiful.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Codeum » 08 May 2012 22:35

Thank you. you're like the ONLY person that comments on my videos.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby djbtown » 09 May 2012 00:06

Wow, this is great. Love the sampling... sometimes people tend to overdo panning on samples, but I think you strike a perfect balance there. If there's anything I'd recommend, it'd be to add a bit more energy towards the end to differentiate 4:30 from 1:30... perhaps a thicker bassline? But it's very well done so far.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Wintergreen » 10 May 2012 02:49

I like it
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Matthew N. » 10 May 2012 04:28

I loved it. 'nough said!
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby soup2504 » 10 May 2012 20:01

I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Codeum » 11 May 2012 13:48

soup2504 wrote:I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.


Why is everyone all of a sudden swarming my posts? this feels pretty suspicious.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Ed Viper » 11 May 2012 14:10

Codeum wrote:
soup2504 wrote:I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.


Why is everyone all of a sudden swarming my posts? this feels pretty suspicious.


Chance. A bunch of people happened to see this one where as they didn't see your other ones :/ It's the best explanation I can come up with.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Matthew N. » 11 May 2012 14:16

Codeum wrote:
soup2504 wrote:I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.


Why is everyone all of a sudden swarming my posts? this feels pretty suspicious.


It's like saying that your making the track awesome is suspicious. It's simply great! :)
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby the4thImpulse » 11 May 2012 16:17

I'm not really a fan of the synthesis involved with this track, to me it sounds too similar to a lot of the mainstream music of the genre. That said its certinly well mixed and flows perfectly, nice work! If you don't mind me suggesting something; try making your tracks more unique in sound design. You have the skills to produce professional grade music but, to me at least, you lack the originality of the top of the line producers.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Matthew N. » 11 May 2012 17:32

Now that I listened to it for the Nth time, I came to a conclusion that the piano beginning @ 2:30 is either a little bit too loud or has too much high frequencies going through. There is a tiny bit of distortion in there. But it's still a track that cannot be not favourited. :)
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Codeum » 11 May 2012 22:10

Matthew_N wrote:
Codeum wrote:
soup2504 wrote:I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.


Why is everyone all of a sudden swarming my posts? this feels pretty suspicious.


It's like saying that your making the track awesome is suspicious. It's simply great! :)



colortwelve posted on all my other tracks saying they are awesome, but they don't get as much attention as this one did. This one wasn't even as good as my others.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby soup2504 » 11 May 2012 22:47

Codeum wrote:
soup2504 wrote:I swear... Your sampling, your glitching, your everything. It's pefect. You're a great great GREAT musician, and don't forget that.


Why is everyone all of a sudden swarming my posts? this feels pretty suspicious.


I'm in the other parts of the forum more frequently than the music section. I just happened to see your post this time around, and even though I saw this song a couple days before I checked here, I decided to leave a comment.
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Re: <original>[pony](house)Equine Sorrow

Postby Ed Viper » 12 May 2012 08:29

Codeum wrote:colortwelve posted on all my other tracks saying they are awesome, but they don't get as much attention as this one did. This one wasn't even as good as my others.


Well then I guess I'll have to listen to the other songs then!
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