<non-pony> <original> Green (Feedback Appreciated)

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I think this song came out really nicely and I don't see anything else I could add or fix. It would be greatly appreciated if you could say what you think.
It's my first attempt at anything ambient so I want to try and get better at it.

http://soundcloud.com/edened/green

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I have a lot to learn when it comes to anything slow and peaceful. This would probably lie within the chill genre if I could place it somewhere. I'm just trying out every kind of music I can and see what works for me basically. I'm more into the faster house, electro tracks, but I'm open to anything.
I really like your track by the way, really dark, I can tell a lot or work went into that. It's really nice.