<WIP><Pony><Original> The Element of Magic

[Emkay]

http://soundcloud.com/emkay-mlp/the-element-of-magic-wip

Howdydoo everyone.
I've spent a couple days working on this song and I've finally made it to the end of the song. However, before I go any further with this, I need some fresh ears to have a listen. I'd very much appreciate some criticisms/advice/anything you wanna give me to help me out with this. =3
Also, just a heads-up, I'll also be making a PMV for this when I put it up on youtube so I want to keep some leeway within the song for some video clips.

EDIT: Updated it. Made a few changes here and there. Pretty happy with it except for the ending. It just seems too abrupt.

[randomblockfilms]

0:45 oooooo i lovez the arpeggio. but im kind of a sucker for arpeggio. its simple but sounds great. and 2:00 sound great too! sounds all majestic-like.

the only thing i aint fond of, is that its a bit repetitive. and it could probably use some more bass. maybe. might not work but it might. idk. lol

[Emkay]

Yeah, it is rather repetitive, isn't it? I'm gonna have to work on that. =P
I'm kinda reluctant to adding in some more bass since I don't want to bring in too many instruments. That and I've had bad experiences with it. Things would sound fine on my headphones but terrible on everything else I play them on.

[ph00tbag]

The ending felt a little abrupt. That's really the only thing I got out of it that hasn't been said. I dunno if you have anything more planned for it, but, some resolution would be nice.

Unless it's supposed to be unresolved.

[Emkay]

The ending felt a little abrupt. That's really the only thing I got out of it that hasn't been said. I dunno if you have anything more planned for it, but, some resolution would be nice.

Unless it's supposed to be unresolved.

I realize it's pretty abrupt. I've worked on it since I posted it here and added the opening notes of the MLP theme to the end to sort of give it that finished feel. It sounds alright but I think I gotta work on it a tad bit more.

[Emkay]

http://soundcloud.com/emkay-mlp/the-element-of-magic-wip-2
New updated version. I tried my best to address the issues you pointed out (and a few of my own). Tell me what you think! =D