<original> <nonpony> Not Yet Decided

[Edened]

This is a WIP so keep that in mind

Basically I need suggestions. Also, you may be asking yourself, "Why is there no real ending?". Because there isn't yet. , so that's pretty much the WIP part of it.
Hope you enjoy

EDIT

I have finished the song and I think it came out alright. Let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/edened/not-yet-decided-1

[Conduit]

This track is ok, but far too repetitive. I'm guessing you're going for a house style track. Remember that although it's ok to have something repeat, alway have something thats dynamic/evolving underneath so that it keeps peoples attention.

[Edened]

This track is ok, but far too repetitive. I'm guessing you're going for a house style track. Remember that although it's ok to have something repeat, alway have something thats dynamic/evolving underneath so that it keeps peoples attention.

Yea I have done a lot to it by adding some filters with automation clips.I also shortened the intro too.

[djbtown]

Might also want to add other tracks to introduce harmonies and a melody... you can add a lot of complexity simply by bringing those in and out at the appropriate times. This sounds like a promising "platform," if you will, that an awesome tune could be built on top of.