<pony><remix> Web Of Deceit (Remix of d.notive Vicious Lies)

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<pony><remix> Web Of Deceit (Remix of d.notive Vicious Lies)

Postby NytMayr » 08 May 2012 16:16

Greetings and salutations! NytMayr here, and as a fairly new addition to the brony musician community, I just now discovered this website. Dunno how I didn't find it earlier, honestly.

Anyways, enough of me blathering on about me. You guys aren't here for that, you guys are here for music! And music you shall receive, for I have recently put out a particular piece that I feel I've put a considerable amount of effort into: A remix of Vicious Lies by d.notive, a song that's edged pretty close to being my favorite brony song. Though, it is actually an instrumental remix, due to me not having the proper hardware to record decent-sounding lyrics. (I'm only 15, cut me some slack.) I tried to give it more of a dance-like feeling to it, as well as throwing in some chiptune elements for good measure. I almost want to put it in the house genre, but I'm horrible at identifying electronic genres, so feel free to correct me if I'm wrong in that estimation.



Any comments, feedback, or anything else is welcome and appreciated. Oh, and yeah, I have a bit of a paranoia problem when it comes to potential screw-ups, so if I posted this in the wrong section or tagged it incorrectly or what-have-you, feel free to start yelling at me about it.
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Re: <pony><remix> Web Of Deceit (Remix of d.notive Vicious L

Postby Matthew N. » 08 May 2012 16:41

The main issue here is mastering. Every single instrument overlaps with each other causing a lot of distortion. Can't you hear it yourself? Apply some EQs, lower the main volume, even compress some of the stuff.
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Re: <pony><remix> Web Of Deceit (Remix of d.notive Vicious L

Postby NytMayr » 08 May 2012 16:47

It's weird. I have actually heard about a few issues about clipping and things like that, but on my end, the song seems perfectly fine. I dunno if it's just my sound system or just me not hearing it. Probably the latter.
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