<wip><original><will be pony themed> Any feedback on this?

[SoaringFlight]

After a while since my first and only song i finally managed to set everything up sample/synth/vst/FL Studio wise, and came up with this in couple of hours:

http://soundcloud.com/soaringflight/possible-wip-should-i-make

I could use some feedback on it, i might go ahead and make it into a finished song. Don't be too bothered with mixing though, its been done in a rush. It has 8 bar progression instead of 16 bar which causes it to be repetitive atm and its missing some lovely samples from Rainbow Dash on both transitions and FX.

[Alecrazer]

What. This is amazing and makes me feel tingly inside. What is this conflicting emotion.

[SoaringFlight]

[CommandSpry]

sorin pls finis song k

[Navron]

Definitely finish the song! You've got a great sound so far, a good transition, and some excellent sounding reverb on those synths.

Adding in the samples will help a bit with the repetition, which is always something harder to avoid when making electronic music, but right now you've got a great trance-like song, and I think you'll learn a lot more by the time you finish it.

My only criticism would be in the percussive clap that comes in at 0:30. I just don't like the sound of it very much, and it seems to be panned equally left and right. I'd try panning the clap a little more to one side, lowering the volume, and perhaps layering the clap with a snappy snare.

[SoaringFlight]

I plan to change the clap sooner or later, will try layering snare in there, although just combo of noise and layered claps might do the job. Thanks for feedback