<PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

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<PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby soup2504 » 01 May 2012 18:45

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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 02 May 2012 07:07

The song sounds a bit sharp and the build up at 2:32 gets quite loud. Other than that...
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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby soup2504 » 02 May 2012 18:13

Gnarrkhaz wrote:The song sounds a bit sharp and the build up at 2:32 gets quite loud. Other than that...


Define "Sharp" :S
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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 03 May 2012 15:29

soup2504 wrote:Define "Sharp" :S


Emphasis on high frequencies. They stick out a little too well (or maybe that's not the problem at all. I don't know anything about mixing : P).
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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby soup2504 » 03 May 2012 19:04

Gnarrkhaz wrote:
soup2504 wrote:Define "Sharp" :S


Emphasis on high frequencies. They stick out a little too well (or maybe that's not the problem at all. I don't know anything about mixing : P).


I wouldn't know either. Because, like, I am horrible at mastering/mixing/everything, and like, um, I have a hard time deciding whether something is too compressed, too loud, too this, too that, etc.
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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby senntenial » 04 May 2012 21:30

I wouldn't use the term "sharp," but it was tinney at key points (Mainly when you were doing a high pass.) Easy fix, just add an EQ and sap the higher frequencies. Other than that, awesome job.
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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby [voodoopony] » 05 May 2012 01:24

Sharp --> mostly around 2.5k

Try taking a wide bell dip (1-4dB mebeh) to the 1.8k - 3k region on the EQ. Preferably where all those hats and the beeping synth mix to; or make a mix bus for those high-end percussive things, and the beeps.

Perhaps I hear an exciter/distortion on some elements. If so, excessive amounts can hurt the ears (so sharp D:)

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Re: <PINO><French/Disco house> Mahogany

Postby soup2504 » 05 May 2012 10:45

[voodoopony] wrote:Perhaps I hear an exciter/distortion on some elements. If so, excessive amounts can hurt the ears (so sharp D:)


Nope, none of that :I Probably just shit mastering.
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