<original> <pony> Pinkie Pie Likes Having Fun

[Crysailis]

http://soundcloud.com/crysailis/crysailis-pinkie-pie-likes

Hey guys, this is my first song ever and my first time posting here too (lurked for about 2 weeks or so). I hope you guys like the song and I would love it if you guys could give me some feedback on what I can do better/change.

[CGEyeGuy]

You should post in the introduction thread.

Repetitive and the vocals don't work right.
Needs more melodies.
Needs structure.
Instruments need to be leveled and eq.

It has potential, but needs more time and work put into it.

I recommend looking up tutorials and visiting the technique thread to learn more.
Also try picking apart one of your favorite tracks and analyzing it.

Welcome to MLR