[Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

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[Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby Lethaargic » 11 Apr 2012 22:13

Level mixing is still pretty off, i'm working on it. Coming out a lot better than the last time I tried to make darkpsy.
balloon party needs some more twisted stuff :twisted:
Critiques appreciated, thanks for listening!


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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby vladnuke » 11 Apr 2012 23:09

Could use a bit more bass. Yeah, a bit more base. I quickly perused darkpsy, and found that a lot of that type of stuff has a bit more bass, and that it adds more depth to the song. Not like dubstep level bass, but just enough. Yeeeah. This is pretty nice, I like the speed and dnb-ness of it.
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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby Lethaargic » 12 Apr 2012 11:13

vladnuke wrote:Could use a bit more bass. Yeah, a bit more base.


I'm trying, it'll get there. the bass want's to drown out the rest of the sounds when I make it any louder.
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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby itroitnyah » 12 Apr 2012 15:51

ouch xD my head. the kicks are a nice touch though. and the watery lazers raped my left ear.
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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby Lethaargic » 13 Apr 2012 23:24

itroitnyah wrote:ouch xD my head. the kicks are a nice touch though. and the watery lazers raped my left ear.


yeah I fixed the the panning on the "watery lazers" already. to too many painful frequencies still?
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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby Lavender_Harmony » 14 Apr 2012 09:10

Theres far too much compression, and your bass sound has too sharp of an attack, I feel. Also your bass lacks..bass.
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Re: [Balloon Party] (WIP) Cyber Kidz

Postby Lethaargic » 22 Apr 2012 23:11

Lavender_Harmony wrote:Theres far too much compression, and your bass sound has too sharp of an attack, I feel. Also your bass lacks..bass.


Just wanted to thank you for the input. I did lighten up on the compression, brought up the attack and release a bit, and boosted the eq at about 48hz. now I have beautiful bass roll off that kick. It's sounding 100X better. weather it makes it on the album or not, it's awesome now.

Also I've made so many changes to this track that I'm not going to bother re uploading it until I'm comfortable with the final submission. Sorry
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