WIP2:
http://soundcloud.com/switch-flipper/glazes-overture-wip2

legion2190 wrote:It's pretty good so far! I particularly love how you did Nightmare Night at the beginning.Thanks!
However, the most noticeable problem is the transitions, they're way too sudden. How you fix this is up to you, I'm no expert on mashups. Making the timpanis (bells?) play over into Rainbow Factory, maybe. That's a good idea. I'll look at that. The other thing is that you're going to need to work on the 'beyond her rainbow factory' bit. Both parts playing over each other don't work. Adjust keys, definitely. I'll probably remove that whole part. The Nightmare Factory sounds good, though, so I'm just gnna extend that. Besides that, I'm looking forward to hearing the whole thing! Why, thank you!
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