<nonpony><inprogress>[First Song] Lumacy - Dew

[Lumacy]

http://soundcloud.com/lumacy/djlumacy-dew-in-progresshttp://soundcloud.com/lumacy/djlumacy-dew-in-progress

[DrSorkenstein]

The intro is waaay too long. It doesn't build up at all towards the next section and sounds a bit bare with only the plucky synth in there. The notes don't sound like they are part of a scale which sounds very wierd to my ears. The section at 1.12 is a lot more interesting than the intro but again the notes you've chosen sound odd to me.
Shorten the intro and add some drums, build it up towards the next section, confine the notes to a scale and finally just add more stuff.

[Overkillius]

Unless you /REALLY/ know what you are doing with your music I'd agree with DrSorkenstein and say you should limit your notes to a scale. I think that the plucks at the beginning could really benefit from just a sustained bass line. Other than that. it seems to be going in an OK direction!