<WIP><Pony> Balloon Party Teaser #1 - Criticism wanted!

[AssertiveFluttershy]

This is still a work in progress and is in no way the final version!

I started making this yesterday for the upcoming balloon party compilation, but then today I heard circuitfry's announcement about it. I'm not sure if this'll be good enough for the compilation, since it's pretty much my first real try at making drumstep/dubstep. Please let me know what you think is good/what you think I can improve on!

Thanks for listening!

http://soundcloud.com/assertivefluttershy/assertive-fluttershy-balloon

EDIT: It's up on youtube now too.

[whypon]

Love the vocals and the melody in this one! I would personally give more attack to the synth that comes at 0:24 , maybe invert the LFO or the enveloppe of the filter cutoff? I can't really tell cause I don't know what do you use, and that's just my taste. But anyways, you should finish it, it's great.