<original><pony> Dreamin' By Facade

[Facade]

Tell me what you think

[the4thImpulse]

As I listen.. (I will be super critcal)

Intro -
Got a little too much sustain on the pluck makes it a bit muddy. Kick is good although I am not a fan of the high pitch ring it has on it. I think there is a little too much sidechaining, the pumping feeling is too much when it first starts butit gets better at :30.

:45 -
Everything comes in too loud compared to the intro, if you do it this way there should be more of a build into it. You have some great sounds in here, I absolutly love what you have done with the vocals. I think for this part it should be softer so it kind of builds throughout the track. I think the track would benifit woth much brighter/warmer hi hats and cymbal here, the ones you picked are a little boring right now (even a eq boost above 10kHz would help).

2:20 -
This is a good (short) breakdown and the transition into it works really good, the build back into the verse is also great and better then the first build at :45. Now were back into the same stuff, you kind of lose the kick here a bit (the high end mostly) I would bring it out a bit more.

Outro -
Well done, slowly bring out parts of the track is a great way of closing, nothing unique but nothing wrong with it. Not really DJ friendly but most brony music isn't.

Everything else is more or less the same stuff/sounds. I enjoyed the track! it was well written and mixed, Great work

[Facade]

thanks ill keep this in mind for later projects