<needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

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<needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby Maniac Shelve » 13 Apr 2012 17:48

I wasn't sure if I was ready to join Balloon party, being as new as I am.
Despite that, I made http://www.fileize.com/view/801efac1-e5b/ an attempt.

I need better vocals than the FLStudio legacy (preferably pony), and it's distinctly lacking in... something :I

edit 6: http://www.fileize.com/view/91cd1dc1-bad/

edit 8: http://www.fileize.com/view/2c346950-7d5/
Last edited by Maniac Shelve on 14 Apr 2012 20:42, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby itroitnyah » 14 Apr 2012 05:21

this song is lacking... in bass. And it's a bit too repetitive, so you need to add a bit of variation. Perhaps you could make some of the parts with the main instrument go higher pitched and then lower pitched each time it repeats itself. But noticably higher or lower pitched. if you just keep it as the same pitch for the entire song, it just gets boring too fast
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby Maniac Shelve » 14 Apr 2012 12:11

http://www.fileize.com/view/91cd1dc1-bad/
More bass, less repetitive (I think).
Thanks for the feedback so far.

Still needs vocals. :3
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby itroitnyah » 14 Apr 2012 19:29

lovin the bass that goes with this :D And you did reduce the repetitiveness to a better level, so this song is great.
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 14 Apr 2012 20:37

It's really sick but kinda... muddy. Clean it up with some EQ.
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby Maniac Shelve » 14 Apr 2012 20:42

oh, yes, I think I just did that.
edit 8: http://www.fileize.com/view/2c346950-7d5/
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Re: <needs pony> <wip> HOW HARD DOES IT HAVE TO BE?

Postby XXDarkShadow79XX » 14 Apr 2012 20:50

Niiiicceee.
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