Here's my new track, I feel it's my best yet, but any and all criticism is VERY welcome:
<Pony><Original> Pinkie Pie is Best Pony
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<Pony><Original> Pinkie Pie is Best Pony
by Scootalootacris » 09 Apr 2012 15:20
Crude stew, do you fear it, Apple Bloom? Sometimes life is not a cakewalk served up on a silver spoon.
Soundcloud / Youtube
Soundcloud / Youtube
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Re: <Pony><Original> Pinkie Pie is Best Pony
by Thirteen » 09 Apr 2012 19:51
Well, based on the beginning part of the song and the title, I was expecting it to be like a happy cheerful tone. But then the drop at 1:08 caught me off guard. Is it such a bad thing though? I don't know. I don't know.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Pinkie Pie is Best Pony
by LunchBagMusic » 09 Apr 2012 20:02
The vocals fit really well rhythmically, and that is something sometimes not seen, so good job!
It feels...empty. Even with the drop. I dunno what it is, but the sound is hollow. It doesn't hit the climax that it should. Perhaps more bass?
It feels...empty. Even with the drop. I dunno what it is, but the sound is hollow. It doesn't hit the climax that it should. Perhaps more bass?
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