<Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

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<Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

Postby Symphon » 04 Apr 2012 18:26

http://soundcloud.com/dragon51116/sapphires-mastered
Well, let's see here... Second song on here. It's like... Electric acoustic type of feel. It's supposed to be about Rarity, and I have lyrics for someone to sing and rap to it, but I haven't been able to do it as I can't sing. So... Here ya go. ^-^

((Edit: Changed original link to the mastered version.))
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

Postby vladnuke » 05 Apr 2012 03:37

The drums need to be louder and more distinct. The pluck synth is actually kinda nice, a bit like freeform jazz, but samey throughout. If you want someone (could be me) to sing/rap for it, you might want to fix those things. But yeah, it's pretty nice and jazzy. Listen to Boards of Canada, they have very distinct drums, yet keep a relaxed tone.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

Postby Symphon » 05 Apr 2012 15:47

vladnuke wrote:The drums need to be louder and more distinct. The pluck synth is actually kinda nice, a bit like freeform jazz, but samey throughout. If you want someone (could be me) to sing/rap for it, you might want to fix those things. But yeah, it's pretty nice and jazzy. Listen to Boards of Canada, they have very distinct drums, yet keep a relaxed tone.

Sounds good. And do you mean distinct drums as in different drum pattern or just louder? Because I could do both if it's really necessary.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

Postby vladnuke » 05 Apr 2012 17:28

Louder and clearer.
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Re: <Pony> <Original> Sapphires - Tuner

Postby Symphon » 06 Apr 2012 07:14

Alright, I'll probably fix it in a bit. Shouldn't be too hard.
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