PIE.mp3

[-djmk-]

http://soundcloud.com/projectmk/pie-mp3

i don't know what im doing

edit: btw its a wip
edit 2: idk if this is even in the right forum. more evidence of my incompetence.

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like the samples used. not wild about the twangy synth but like hardstyle ok. needs a bit more work (synths , structiure, and eq) and maybe some context of what the song is about and what you were wanna get across. i went into a small diatribe in another thread (and don't want to quote it again) about the importance of getting a point across in your song and to link it to the show so its means something to the brony hearing it. This has the samples (yay) but i really don't an idea on what its about, which makes it just sort or a bunch of notes strung together. while it doesn't have to be a song, think about what the point of your song is, have the music tell that story, name it appropriately and then get it to sound as good as you can.

[-djmk-]

thanks for your tips Pon-3, I'll definitely keep those in mind as i work this piece out!
also i really have no idea what i could make this song about. It was originally going to be something panicky about dropping a pie and flipping your shit, but then I went to Branson and the bluegrass stuck in my head. That twangy synth your hearing is actually a banjo soundfont (which i have replaced with an acoustic guitar and cleaned up massively) and the eq and mastering still need work because i'm still composing :V