<pony> <original> <First Song> Time Splicer, need criticism

[SENSE1]

What's good bronies, I'm new to My Little Remix and the whole music production thing, and I wanted to get some feed back on my first track I made it on the DAW garageband, trying to learn as much as I can before upgrading to Logic Pro. Please help me out, criticism and feedback appreciated very much yo!

Youtube:


Souncloud:
http://soundcloud.com/asian-sensation/time-splicer



...heh and if those didn't work, here's links

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d2Mx-NqIHZA
Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/asian-sensation/time-splicer

*EDIT* woo got the embeds to work, haha

[the4thImpulse]

For the embed to work just hit the 'youtube' or 'soundcloud' button in the editor and paste the link in there.

This is your first track? It is really good and I can't say I have any criticisms on this one. Keep up the great work!

[SENSE1]

Oh haha woopsies and yeah its my first song produced on the computer, my other songs i produced them on...an android phone app haha and for real?? Sweet thanks man it means a lot