<Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

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<Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby HatBrony » 16 Mar 2012 04:29



So what do you think? I SWEAR IF I HAVE TO FIX IT, I will be totally okay with it.
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby LunchBagMusic » 16 Mar 2012 04:58

Needs moar bass.

Apart from that, very Pinkie. It does need the bass though.

That's about it. Good job!
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby Freewave » 16 Mar 2012 12:26

Its nice and pleasant. Could use some bass as stated but many improve with further development. It's got that sound that's very common with first time producers so maybe if you feel its missing something (and it kind of is if you nitpick) you can try some other vsts in the mix. Again nothing is bad with it but its really the difference between good and great and which you're aiming for and what overall sound you want ;)

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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby Sgt-Whip (DJQ) » 16 Mar 2012 12:44

It's a pretty happy track. Not really my thing (the beat I mean. I'm totally into happiness), so I might be a bit biased in my review. However, I agree with LunchBag that the track needs more bass. Your kick is quite good, but other than that, more sub would be nice. Also certain chords sound a bit sour, but you might have meant that as a part of artistic expression.
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby HatBrony » 16 Mar 2012 20:11

Sub-bass/bass. Got it. One question. HOW DO I DO THAT?
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby colortwelve » 16 Mar 2012 20:34

You use FL, right? Sytrus has a pretty nice clean sub-bass preset.
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby HatBrony » 17 Mar 2012 02:35

http://soundcloud.com/hatbrony/pinkie-gets-electric-final

I added sub-bass. I think it's better now. Maybe... :?
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby Freewave » 17 Mar 2012 10:58

sounds better and more filled out. :)
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby CommandSpry » 17 Mar 2012 12:39

Nice! :)
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby Legion » 17 Mar 2012 14:36

Ooh. Very well done, I like it a lot.
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Re: <Original><Pony><Collab?> Pinkie gets Electric

Postby Triple_B » 18 Mar 2012 01:55

Listened to the soundcloud version;

The default clap only bothered me for a little while, it did seem to fit nicely after a second or two of me being annoyed by it.

It seemed very 8-bit-ish, in a good way. I really liked it. And the sub really did fill it out.
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