<Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

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<Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby lunarz » 14 Mar 2012 13:21

http://soundcloud.com/officiallunarz/lunarz-lonely-madness
What do you think?
If you think some parts are too loud or quiet, its supposed to be like that, as it creates a harsh sense within the song making it more effective.
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The backstory: Luna is trapped on the moon for decades,
with nobody to be with, not even talk to she goes on the brink of insanity.
She slowly goes deeper and deeper into a state of mass depression and insanity.
Until no more.
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby XiF » 14 Mar 2012 18:28

I like this tune! I also like the static in the background at the beginning( Was it static? :P) ; it might sound interesting if you kept through out the song. Nice instrument choice, the ending wasn't my favorite though. Overall, I enjoyed this! :D :D :D
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby soup2504 » 14 Mar 2012 19:45

Actually.... Quite good! Although "Grimdark" doesn't describe it at all. But that isn't the song, and the song is great.
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby Metal Core Pony » 14 Mar 2012 19:57

I enjoyed the song very much. Both statics at the beginning and ending of the song made me jump a little :D . It's making me really scared to walk around my home though :lol:
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby the4thImpulse » 15 Mar 2012 01:42

This is good stuff, the theme and the back story really fit it well.
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby lunarz » 15 Mar 2012 01:59

XiF wrote:I like this tune! I also like the static in the background at the beginning( Was it static? :P) ; it might sound interesting if you kept through out the song. Nice instrument choice, the ending wasn't my favorite though. Overall, I enjoyed this! :D :D :D


At the very start i used a very distorted industrial ambience of which is distorted more and pitched it a bit, the rain like effect was a sample courtesy of natsukashi/dashsunglasses it was a few notes, distorted, then bitcrushed to simulate the effect of rain, i figured the static would be a good effect too.

Thankyou very much guys! I didnt expect the feedback to be this good! Im really happy, you have all just made my day. Im proud that u like it as im still a beginner and you like my wrok, thankyou soo much!
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby Freewave » 15 Mar 2012 14:19

more experimental / ambient music is kind of missing from the brony community so this is a welcome track. like it for the most part and hope you fill that gap. grimark pony album would be cool, my pinkie sense tells me soooo.
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Re: <Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> Lonely Madness

Postby XiF » 15 Mar 2012 16:22

lunarz wrote:
XiF wrote:I like this tune! I also like the static in the background at the beginning( Was it static? :P) ; it might sound interesting if you kept through out the song. Nice instrument choice, the ending wasn't my favorite though. Overall, I enjoyed this! :D :D :D


At the very start i used a very distorted industrial ambience of which is distorted more and pitched it a bit, the rain like effect was a sample courtesy of natsukashi/dashsunglasses it was a few notes, distorted, then bitcrushed to simulate the effect of rain, i figured the static would be a good effect too.

Thankyou very much guys! I didnt expect the feedback to be this good! Im really happy, you have all just made my day. Im proud that u like it as im still a beginner and you like my wrok, thankyou soo much!

It sounds like a transmission! (That's what I was thinking of! : P)
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