<non-pony><original><wip> Fontem

[gravyman]

http://soundcloud.com/gravyman/gravyman-fontem-v2

Something I've been working on for the past week and I'm running out of ideas on this one. So I was hoping that i could get some pointers on things that could be added/removed/changed. I'm aware of it being kind of repetitive, but that is usually how I work.

[the4thImpulse]

I dont really know what to say about this track, its missing something that could make it a great track. I guess there isn't enough variation in the sounds themselves. You have all the basic elements here (drums bass, lead ect) but your missing all the space filling effects and noises that would make this a real track and not just some loops thrown together.

I hope you understand what I'm tring to say, you have some nice parts here and they are well mixed together for the most part(drums are a bit behind the mix imo).

[gravyman]

I dont really know what to say about this track, its missing something that could make it a great track. I guess there isn't enough variation in the sounds themselves. You have all the basic elements here (drums bass, lead ect) but your missing all the space filling effects and noises that would make this a real track and not just some loops thrown together.

I hope you understand what I'm tring to say, you have some nice parts here and they are well mixed together for the most part(drums are a bit behind the mix imo).

Yeah, i felt it lacked some variations too. As for the drums, rearranging them to go better with the song is the next step. Thanks for the feedback. :]

[gravyman]

http://soundcloud.com/gravyman/gravyman-fontem-v2

Did some updates:
• Changed the sounds a bit
• Changed the drums for worse
• Widened the stereo image

Made it sound worse i guess.