<pony><Original> The White Crown

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I usually don't do a lot of house/trance or whatever this genre might be. But I felt like doing one and heres a work in progress of that. Have a listen if you feel like it!

[DJSheogowrath]

Mkay. If you don't mind, I'mma lay some feedback down.
-I like the intro, with the little pop/clicky things and the synth fading in.
-The buildup (that starts around 1:00) is OK, but there isn't really anything after it. It's still the same riff. I would add to it, seeing as how that's the whole point of a build up.
-The transition at 1:37 is a bit awkward, but after that it sounds great. I especially like it at 3:35 where it shifts into the plucked synth.
A few little things, but it sounds fantastic. This is really good, especially for someone who doesn't do house (as you yourself have said you are).

[bread]

Mkay. If you don't mind, I'mma lay some feedback down.
-I like the intro, with the little pop/clicky things and the synth fading in.
-The buildup (that starts around 1:00) is OK, but there isn't really anything after it. It's still the same riff. I would add to it, seeing as how that's the whole point of a build up.
-The transition at 1:37 is a bit awkward, but after that it sounds great. I especially like it at 3:35 where it shifts into the plucked synth.
A few little things, but it sounds fantastic. This is really good, especially for someone who doesn't do house (as you yourself have said you are).

The thing is that I would like to do some more house but I still don't feel quite comfortable in the genre yet (or in any genre really).
About the 1:00 mark is something I didn't notice before but I can see what you mean. I will see if I can make it more intresting than just the same chords as the ones leading into it.
The transition at 1:37 is really akward I just didn't have the time to fix it before I uploaded, plus I'm lazy.
I'm very glad you liked most of it and I really appreciate the feedback!

[bread]

Done!