<Original> Fluttershy

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<Original> Fluttershy

Postby Aerial View » 13 Mar 2012 17:58

http://soundcloud.com/captain-galactic/fluttershy
Hello! I'm new here! Here's a song I made a while back that you can download for free on Bandcamp. Hope you all like it.
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Re: <Original> Fluttershy

Postby the4thImpulse » 14 Mar 2012 00:44

I really like what your going for, but there a few I would like to point out to help make this track awesome, if you don't mind.

Every sound clashes with each other a bit, I would put an EQ on every sound in the track from pads to individual cymbals and cut out all uneeded frequencies, its best to do this while listening to the whole track at the same time not the specific sound you eqing. The kick drum and snare are a little behind in the mix, it could help to move them close to the top, and turn the hi hats down.
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Re: <Original> Fluttershy

Postby Aerial View » 14 Mar 2012 14:53

Thanks I always end up with cymbals that are too loud.
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Re: <Original> Fluttershy

Postby Freewave » 15 Mar 2012 14:14

track sounds nice but as 4I said it could use some eq'ing but otherwise the song structure is pretty good. its a free country and you can charge money if you want but even 50 cents (not a bad price) is a little unrealistic when 95% of the brony community does it for free. if you can put together a set of tracks of this caliber, with EQ'ing, on an ep or an album for a $1 you'd likely see less grumbling. FYI.
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