It's pretty neat. My only concerns are that it relies pretty heavily on the voice clips used. Not that it's necessarily a big deal, but in some spots as opposed to a song, it feels more like a story retelling with music set to it. Along with that, there isn't really a cohesive theme to the clips. I didn't get any relation between Luna and Derpy in the song, it made me question: why were they both included in the same song? What sort of a relationship do they have? If you are able to formulate some sort of reason or idea/theme to combine and put them in the same song, there's no reason you couldn't, it's just here I don't know what the theme is, which is why I'm left feeling that it's like background music for clips from the show. Now, don't get me wrong, it could just be me, maybe you do have some idea that ties them together and whatnot, it just didn't seem to present itself in the song. And also don't think I didn't like it, I did, the music was good, but do try to have something tying it all together in the song.
The actual music itself minus the voice clips would probably end up being a bit repetitive, but it's still cool, especially the ominous bell sound. Keep at it! If you have any questions about the DAW you're using, or just questions in general, refer to the Technique subforum, there's a lot of helpful guides/tips there. I'm interested in hearing more work from you!