<Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

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<Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Elliptisoar » 18 Feb 2012 02:23

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6UbnKCO3TKM

Tell me what you think I could improve on :3

If you could, provide tips on EQ'ing because I'm pretty new to that sort of thing.
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Makkon » 18 Feb 2012 04:34

Not bad my friend, I'm usually not a fan of this sort of style, but you're hitting a frequency in that lower end bass that just feels right.
I do think that your hits could be much harder. Make that beat really pack a punch!
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Elliptisoar » 18 Feb 2012 23:41

Makkon wrote:Not bad my friend, I'm usually not a fan of this sort of style, but you're hitting a frequency in that lower end bass that just feels right.
I do think that your hits could be much harder. Make that beat really pack a punch!


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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby DrSorkenstein » 19 Feb 2012 14:58

Elliptisoar wrote:
How's this? [REDACTED]


Better in my opinion!

Also my brain hurts from excessive headbanging... Thanks! :D
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Elliptisoar » 11 Mar 2012 14:29

I think I've got the mastering down just right on this one. If you haven't listened to the first version I posted, please do so before critique. Thanks :3

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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby DrSorkenstein » 11 Mar 2012 14:46

There seems to be quite a lot of hissing white noise in the higher frequencies. Migh be the melody synths hitting some harsh frequency way up high. This goes also for when the piano glitches out. Others might be able to give better advise. It's really freaking good though! Like my absolute favorite so far good!
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Elliptisoar » 12 Mar 2012 05:59

I swear I'm just gonna keep posting these XD
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby North Kozar » 13 Mar 2012 18:39

Aight. So this is sick. I remember hearing this before I had even joined up here. Most recent WIP segments sound great. I can't find anything wrong with them. Welp... It's awesome, there's nothing else I have to say!
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Re: <Original><WIP> Elliptisoar - Discorded

Postby Elliptisoar » 14 Mar 2012 10:23

North Kozar wrote:Aight. So this is sick. I remember hearing this before I had even joined up here. Most recent WIP segments sound great. I can't find anything wrong with them. Welp... It's awesome, there's nothing else I have to say!


Thanks man! No one has found a problem with it. I guess this is the final. (Finally)
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