<Original> <Creepy/Grim/Dark> <WIP> Need critique please! :)

[lunarz]

Tell me what you think, its no where near finished yet, i have so many plans for it.

http://soundcloud.com/officiallunarz/grimdark-wip

[colortwelve]

It's a cool melody, and the plucks have some really cool effects going on, but the white noise in the opening is way disruptive.

Also, I'm liking the minor glitching at the end. I can see this going a lot of cool places if you work on it (personally, the glitching made me think of Soma by deadmau5...).

[North Kozar]

So there's this thing, that makes me kinda scared: The whole song (that's a good thing). There's sooooo many possible directions you could take this. Since you say you already have a lot of plans for it, I won't bug you with my opinion on what I think it could do. I agree the glitching at the end is pretty neat sounding and it all has this pretty great atmospheric feel to it, while still having a driving force that leads the song on.

Biggest thing I noticed was at the beginning. The high pitched screech/scrape sound is pretty ear piercing, so I'd recommend toning that down just a bit. And the static kinda does the same thing. I'd say EQ them to reduce some of the highs. But just slightly so it doesn't sound too filtered. Beyond that, I don't have much else to say at this point. I'm very interested to see what's going to happen with it!