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<Pony><Original>More decibels required

Postby Daymare » 09 Mar 2012 07:28



Song I did that was originally going to be submitted to seeds of kindness until I saw the "No vocal samples from the show" rule. Oh well XD Let me know what you think.
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Re: <Pony><Original>More decibels required

Postby the4thImpulse » 09 Mar 2012 19:31

This is a good piece, if you remove the vocals then you could send it in for the album.

As for advice the main synth riff has a lot going on it the high that clashes with itself, work with the eq's in the upper frequencies and cut some of it out. The cymbals should stand out a bit more in those places, let them fill those high frequencies. I would add a snare with a bunch of reverb to the mix too.
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Re: <Pony><Original>More decibels required

Postby Daymare » 10 Mar 2012 13:08

I thought about that, but I just feel like the song wouldn't make much sense without the vocal sample. As for the EQing, the project file is on another comp I won't have access to for about 2 weeks. But I will take that into consideration for other songs, thanks. :D
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Re: <Pony><Original>More decibels required

Postby Freewave » 10 Mar 2012 18:38

I like this man, got a nice feel to it. Even if the samples have been overused in other tracks they at least are a good use of them here.
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